NaNoMangO Comic

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I livestreamed my process on drawing this page, which resulted in it feeling a bit rushed. The building in panel 4 in particular is a complete joke. I like the silhouette skyline I made in panel 3, but I wounder if I should have inverted the colors. Speaking of color, the only time I use color in this comic is to represent magical powers. Aarl's magic is cyan.

The "no job, no money" construction in panel 2 is too similar to the "no memory, no identification, no one who recognized me" on page 2. I need more variety in my prose. I had the same problem with the first panel on page 2 and page 3, each of which start with "I woke up".